Stuck in a mysterious dark ‘place’,
I was walking on gloomy pathways,
Completely puzzled, which way to go,
As dark winds of mystery began to blow!
Some strange sounds made me wary,
Dreary place, made even more scary,
Demons were all over the place,
With that brutal grin on their face.
They suddenly started laughing at me,
With that cruel, wild, devilish glee,
As if trying to dictate terms of satanity,
Trying hard to kill my humanity.
I kept running, they kept chasing,
Serious trouble is what I was facing,
Escaping seemed to be an impossible mission,
When a bright pink lamp sparkled my vision!
I picked up the lamp and a miracle followed,
Darkness dispelled, demons were swallowed,
I wondered what this lamp could be,
Written on it, the word ‘Love’ I could see.
Shocked, amazed, I was blown apart,
To know that ‘place’ was my heart,
Happier than ever, filled with glee,
I saw my soul approaching towards me!
– Nikesh Lilani
Beautifully worded ✌✌
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Thank you so much.
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Beautiful❤ as always….😁❤
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Thanks a lot😁
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You’re welcome😉☺
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Well written and presentable.. You will succeed!
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Thank you for kind compliment. Mighty glad you liked it…
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It’s beautiful nd I loved the lamp part . Well composed👌
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Thank you so much for reading. Very glad to have such inquisitive readers like you…
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Same here . You have written after a long but very very nice . Keep writing
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I hardly get time these days.. its all building up for the board exams… so as soon as I get some time I compose some stuff. And I see you too haven’t posted much recently..
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Yes, as holidays has started . I’m thinking to get back which I missed a lot , writing . But flow bane mh time lg rha h .
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Oh! I understand…
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Thanks for that
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Beautiful usage of words… Especially the part where miracle followed 😇
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Thanks a lot for reading. Glad you liked it..
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Well written 👍
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Thanks a lot. Mighty glad you liked it.
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My pleasure ☺
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Always love a happy ending🙂
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Indeed. ☺
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Just wow!!! Thats extremely inspiring! yassss
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Thank you so much. Glad you found it inspiring!
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Wonderful write!
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Thank you so much! mighty glad you liked it
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Congratulations 👍. I have nominated you for the award. Check my recent post.
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Thanks a lot! Very grateful to you.
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Welcome 😊
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Hey! Another beautiful poem…
Really it touched my heart… Specially the last stanzas… Well written… Keep going on… 👍
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Thanks brother. Cheers!!
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Cheers!!
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You are really something to be sought after for inspiration. Thank you for inspiring me and all the best to continue this.👍👍
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This really means a lot to me… Thank you so much !☺
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Love this piece.And how you ended it. However, the second stanza here could improve on the wordings. Love all the other stanzas, though. Especially the first one. Enthralling.
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Thank you for your opinion. I’ll surely make an improvement. And glad you liked it .
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